(EFL higher elementary level – AUA level 8)
If you want to write anything good you need to plan first. You’re writing for purpose – to practice the language you have been studying. You need to think about the question, the grammar you are going to use, and the vocabulary that you need. This student has done a pretty good job.
Her mind map would have been more useful to her if she had included some of the grammar and vocabulary that she wanted to use, but her writing was pretty good anyway.
Her final mark for this was 97.5%. Good work!